my positive feedback incuded:
- use of effects (not too many)
- use of split-screen
- appropriate shots (length, type and framing of)
- easily engaging
- music created tension
- steady shots
the improvements of the final piece were:
- audience felt that the shot of the trolley was irrelevant
- too many flashing lits and
- felt that the titles were inconsistant.
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