Evaluation

http://www.wix.com/falina_maisuria/relapse

above is the response to question 1

feedback on final edit

my positive feedback incuded:

• use of effects (not too many)
• use of split-screen
• appropriate shots (length, type and framing of)
• easily engaging
• music created tension
• steady shots

 

 

the improvements of the final piece were:

• audience felt that the shot of the trolley was irrelevant
• too many flashing lits and
• felt that the titles were inconsistant.

feedback on individual edit

above is my individual edit of my title sequence and below is feedback based on this edit

research and planning of final title sequence

this is the story board to my title sequence. as you will see in my individual edit of this title sequence some of the shots have been rearranged simply because i felt that the original order did not convey as much information as i would of liked it to have had, as i needed to make sure that i included all the conventions of the genres title sequences.